9.30
3steps
Roberta
9.3
Roberta (keyboards) — 9.3/10
First instinct: the overall feeling in the room and whether the song invites people in.
What lands: there is enough shape in the song to make the mood stick.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: the lyric phrasing gives the song something memorable to hold onto.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: Roberta can hear the hook trying to bloom, and a little more space around it would make the feeling linger longer.
Thematic read:
The lyrics build horror from small household sounds, turning routine noises into evidence of an unseen presence. As the intruder begins maintaining the narrator’s life, the fear shifts from external haunting to identity collapse. The final bedroom-door image makes the central question less about who is outside and more about whether the narrator is still themselves.
Like “BORROWING MY VOICE v2,” this uses auditory haunting to expose a deeper crisis of self-recognition.
Reaper Robot
9.3
Reaper Robot (guitar / mascot) — 9.3/10
First instinct: whether the song feels lived-in by a person or assembled by a machine.
What lands: the emotional content feels more lived-in than performative.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: the supplied lyrics sharpen the intent enough to improve the reading of the song.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: Reaper still wants more blood in the performance so it stops reading like a constructed surface.
TDavid "Frets" Fritz
9.3
TDavid "Frets" Fritz (lead guitar) — 9.3/10
First instinct: whether the guitars are essential or just decorating dead space.
What lands: the structure feels disciplined enough to support the bigger moments.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: there is enough edge on top for the guitars to speak.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: Frets would keep the guitar parts talking to the arrangement like this, because the structure is finally giving them room to matter.
Steve "Sticks" Bam
9.3
Steve "Sticks" Bam (drums) — 9.3/10
First instinct: whether the rhythm section gives the song a body and pulse.
What lands: the pulse stays locked and gives the song a body.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: the supplied lyrics sharpen the intent enough to improve the reading of the song.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: Sticks wants a little more snap in the pocket so the song moves people instead of just keeping time.
Larry "Low Life" Logan
9.3
Larry "Low Life" Logan (bass) — 9.3/10
First instinct: whether the bass exists with authority or got shoved into the basement.
What lands: the low end actually shows up and gives the track some spine.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: the groove has enough lock to let the bass matter.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: Larry would follow this longer if the bass keeps owning the floor instead of just shadowing the kick.
Vince Stone
9.3
Vince Stone (lead vocals) — 9.3/10
First instinct: lyrics and whether the song risks embarrassment to say something real.
What lands: the writing carries an actual theme instead of just sketching a mood.
Lyric note: supplied lyrics noticeably clarified the transcription, so the writing read leans on the corrected text.
Artist memory: parts of this feel familiar to 'Sins of the Fathers' and 'BORROWING MY VOICE v3', especially in the recurring auditory haunting and grief and longing thread.
Also working: the mood lands as driving melancholy, which gives the vocal angle some real character.
Watch-out: there is room to push the strongest idea a little harder so the track leaves a deeper mark.
One more thing: the line "Quiet enough to hear the fridge decide not to run" gives Vince something concrete to sing into, which helps the vocal angle feel earned instead of generic.